Rectal-Fissure's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Spartan: part I]

I really liked it!

The music was chosen perfectly, the voices were done real well, I liked the story, and the graphics were of the better kind!

Can't wait to see the sequel!

[Jesus Christ in Swim Meet]

Nice!

Nice work, simple, short, and funny. Well thought out.

Also, thank you for using my music!

[lll_Deception Part 1_lll]

Nice.

As I said before, your graphics get better by the time. Nice choice on the theme, here, aswell.

On one moment, you made the little dude run, and played a bit of music there. I don't even think that lasted two seconds. Try to avoid that in the future, it looks kind of... Well, silly. Either make the scene long enough to play the music, or leave it out.

Also, waaaay too short. Make it longer. Really.

As for the second episode, he could be down, and depressed. Eventually, maybe make it so that the girl finds out he loved her, and laughs at him for that. Then, you could bring the violence in, ex.: suicide, massacre, etc.

I'm looking forward to the second episode.

alexsmolik responds:

First of all, thanks for the compliments. You didn't like the part where he runs ? Oh well ... I thought it was funny lol.
I think the second episode will be much much gore and filled with violence, that's the way I want it to be hehe. But I'll let you people decide though.
Thanks for the review
Alex

[Sounds Of Thunder]

Un-be-lievable.

Fantastic work. Very touching indeed. The artwork was marvelous. The sound wasn't good, but that's only a small minus for a flash -no, movie would be the correct word- like this.
Like "Till Death Do Us Part", very touching.

Great work.

[KOROSU- the black samurai]

Very nice!

Great animation, you have some real talent there! The graphics were very good for your first non-stick film, the only minus I can think of is the sync. When done talking, their lips still move. I know it must be hard, but try to fix that.

I can't wait for the sequel!

[Gali X]

Not bad!

But I suggest you remove the "again"-button if it doesn't work. Also, I noticed you played an audio clip once, then used some other music, and then used the first clip again. Try to vary your music, it makes it sound better. Also, voices are always a plus, but aren't necessary.

The faces were done well, the blood was somewhat unrealistic, but I'm sure you'll learn. Also, try to make them walk more realistic. The guy just slides over the screen without him moving.

Good work anyway, nice storyline to it, I look forward to the next one.

[four seconds.]

Good!

Short, random, and funny. Very good. The sound was mangnificent. Really, it was. Also, the graphics of that 4 second long scene were very nice, if you can draw like that, you should make a longer one.
Kudos to you.

[lll_Pelennor Fields_lll]

Alex...

As the former guy said, you can't call it the battle of Pellenor if there isn't any fighting in it. But your graphics keep on improving. So yeah. Nice work anyway!

alexsmolik responds:

lol. I should call it "La chevauchée des Rohirrim" but I just don't know how to say it in english. And I thought that "Pelennor Fields" would attract more teh people lewl.
Thanks for the "graphics" compliment ! I am doing some work on it fo'sho ! I wish I had a graphic tablet like synj...
Thanks for the review.
Alex

[lll_Smolik's journey_lll]

WTF dude?

The guy goes to India, and ends up on the north pole? Weird.

alexsmolik responds:

LOL. Yeah.
That's the magic in the movie. The guy obviously accidentally took another plane and ends up in the North Pole. Do not ask why one month later. Just ... See the magic !
Thanks for the review.
Alex

[Los Dias Sin Dias]

Wondeful.

As said before, the symbolism was very well though out. It was a touching movie. Very good.